| Extreme Seduction - Chapters 9, 10 |
[Jan. 13th, 2007|03:18 pm] |
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As my first fiction in English, "Extreme Seduction" was erased from fanfiction.net by the administrators, I repost here the story.
I warn you that it is a NC-17 rating story which involve a relationship between two men (Harry Potter and Severus Snape). Harry is 17.
As I am French and not bilingual with the English language, there are surely some mistakes. At least with the first three chapters as I hadn't a beta reader at that time. After that, I had had the help of two kind persons: fistly, Ataraxis and secondly, Shalane. Summary: Overnight, Harry changes from The-Boy-Who-Lived to The-Boy-Who-Makes-Hogwarts-Men-Drool, but not all of the men. What's happening and what is the cause? And who has been hit by Harry's extreme seduction? Slash SSHP.
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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| Extreme Seduction - Chapters 7, 8 |
[Jan. 13th, 2007|02:35 pm] |
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As my first fiction in English, "Extreme Seduction" was erased from fanfiction.net by the administrators, I repost here the story.
I warn you that it is a NC-17 rating story which involve a relationship between two men (Harry Potter and Severus Snape). Harry is 17.
As I am French and not bilingual with the English language, there are surely some mistakes. At least with the first three chapters as I hadn't a beta reader at that time. After that, I had had the help of two kind persons: fistly, Ataraxis and secondly, Shalane. Summary: Overnight, Harry changes from The-Boy-Who-Lived to The-Boy-Who-Makes-Hogwarts-Men-Drool, but not all of the men. What's happening and what is the cause? And who has been hit by Harry's extreme seduction? Slash SSHP.
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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| Extreme Seduction - Chapters 5, 6 |
[Jan. 13th, 2007|02:26 pm] |
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As my first fiction in English, "Extreme Seduction" was erased from fanfiction.net by the administrators, I repost here the story.
I warn you that it is a NC-17 rating story which involve a relationship between two men (Harry Potter and Severus Snape). Harry is 17.
As I am French and not bilingual with the English language, there are surely some mistakes. At least with the first three chapters as I hadn't a beta reader at that time. After that, I had had the help of two kind persons: fistly, Ataraxis and secondly, Shalane. Summary: Overnight, Harry changes from The-Boy-Who-Lived to The-Boy-Who-Makes-Hogwarts-Men-Drool, but not all of the men. What's happening and what is the cause? And who has been hit by Harry's extreme seduction? Slash SSHP.
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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| Extreme Seduction - Chapters 1, 2, 3 and 4 |
[Jan. 13th, 2007|01:54 pm] |
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As my first fiction in English, "Extreme Seduction" was erased from fanfiction.net by the administrators, I repost here the story.
I warn you that it is a NC-17 rating story which involve a relationship between two men (Harry Potter and Severus Snape). Harry is 17.
As I am French and not bilingual with the English language, there are surely some mistakes. At least with the first three chapters as I hadn't a beta reader at that time. After that, I had had the help of two kind persons: fistly, Ataraxis and secondly, Shalane. Summary: Overnight, Harry changes from The-Boy-Who-Lived to The-Boy-Who-Makes-Hogwarts-Men-Drool, but not all of the men. What's happening and what is the cause? And who has been hit by Harry's extreme seduction? Slash SSHP.
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story. |
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[Jan. 12th, 2007|07:13 pm] |
Happy new year for all of you! :)
This year will see the end of my fiction: "What men want" and I deeply regret the lack of update for more than a year.
I still have 4 complete chapters to translate and the last paragraphs of the chapter 11.
The titles are:
Chapter 11: The confession
Chapter 12: The mistake
Chapter 13: Forgive me
Chapter 14: A very disturbing pensieve
Chapter 15: The candies' thief
I know that it is not a lot but I give you the beginning of the next chapter. It is not beta'ed so, surely, there are a lot of mistakes. I would have liked to give you more but the next paragraph should be checked because I'm not sure it is understandable.
Chapter 11 : The confession
‘Oh no!’ sighed Harry inwardly. ‘I can be so stupid sometimes! I should have think to that and now there you go!’
“Potter,” began the potions master with a low and emotionless voice. “now that I made you drink the antidote, in exactly ten minutes, you will forget every things that has happened in this room. Then, your memory won’t be able to remember all this embarassing situation which, I think, please you… seeing your recent behaviour.”
Snape was not looking at him and endeavoured to hide him his real feelings but his efforts were useless because Harry could know each of his thoughts and at that moment, he would have cried about it. His teacher loved him. Yes, he was in love with him and suffered to think that his student had adopted this attitude only because of a potion that somebody had made him drink. Now, it was necessary that he undeceived him.
The man’s black eyes turned to him and the teacher said, "Now, while I can still do it, I would like to ask you whether you know who could have given you the potion you swallowed."
Harry did not answer. He could just not. His throat was so tight because of the moanings of pain that he could hear in his mind coming from his professor, and he was so upset by this hiden suffering that it brought tears in his eyes. Without realizing it, he started to cry.
Severus opened widely his horrified eyes and exclaimed, "What’s happen, Potter? You know who is this person? They forced you to do something that you did not want?" |
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[Sep. 26th, 2006|06:51 pm] |
Finally, I've started translating again and even if I translate slower in English than I write in French, I continue all the same and hope to update a chapter of "What Men Want" very soon.
In any case, I'll try my best ;) |
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[Jun. 28th, 2006|11:30 pm] |
Here we go ! Tonight, I created this LJ for my English readers. I already had one in French and now it is in English for the same reason : the censure of the site fanfiction.net.
It has been a while that I wanted to create a LJ in English but I didn't have enough time to do it.
In fact, I have really been busy for a year now, that's why I haven't updated "What Men Want" since the 07/03/05. I'm still busy because right now, I'm moving and my removal takes times but I hope to be able to translate this summer and post a chapter in july or in august.
I'm sorry to keep you all waiting. I know that's not pleasant. All I can say is that I'm truly sorry and that I won't give up my stories, in English or in French. I even plan to translate more of my fics in English. Particularly a short story about sex phone that my French readers have liked. I hope it will be the same with you :) |
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